The DARE essay is a rite of passage for fifth graders across the country. It can easily fall into a rehashing of statistics from the DARE book. A colleague says the DARE essays of her students were lifeless while the purposeful writing they did was alive. "When students are focused on constructing paragraphs and sentences to comply with a program or format, they may learn to write to a standard, but we often lose the voice of the writer in the process" (146).
Luckily, I had a DARE officer who encouraged me when I asked to break free of the prescribed formula found in the exercise book. The persuasion of the DARE piece can be embedded in many different genres. I encouraged poetry, memoirs (some of them heart-breaking), letters begging a loved one to quit addictive behavior, and skits with fairy tale characters adversely affected by alcohol and drugs (the Big Bad Wolf couldn't blow a house down because he smoked and the Gingerbread Man couldn't run fast enough to get away.) The high school drama department performed some of the best pieces for DARE graduation which meant that more students were recognized than just the overall classroom winners.
Our annual letters from Santa project was another project giving student writers authentic audience and purpose. The first grade teachers sent their students' letters to Santa to us, and then we wrote responses to them. Our letters were rich with humor and carefully selected words. The high school got involved as well because they typed all the letters with matching font so our handwriting wouldn't let children wonder if there was more than one Santa.
Our service projects also were authentic writing projects. My students decided having an extra supervisory adult on board school buses would decrease bullying and wrote to the governor with their recommendation. They successfully lobbied the principal to allow students to carry water bottles to class.
Can I craft online writing projects with as much authenticity and purpose? I have written an online assignment with personal value to me--exploring where my beliefs come from and developing that into a podcast--but much of the authentic work in the face to face classroom was charged with a spirit of collaboration. How do I bring that to an online writing course?
I will have to think carefully about how to use shared documents, forums, and assignments to expand the place writing has as a purposeful activity, with the power to "be the change." How have you brought purpose and authenticity to an online writing course?
Routman, Regie. Writing Essentials. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2005. Print.

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Colleen,
ReplyDeleteWow, this is a very powerful post! You sound very dedicated to your students and their overall well-being as writers. I think you can achieve the spirit of collaboration in an online learning environment. You could consider posting a discussion forum for the students. Or, you could consider having the students video chat each other for a more authentic collaboration. The video chat would allow the students to see and hear each other, which will make the collaboration more personal and meaningful.
Thanks for the helpful suggestions. My online classes at MSU have convinced me of the power of discussion forums. Our student blog wasn't a good platform for discussions. I could use a wiki perhaps. The possibilities for video chatting are certainly looking better as more schools move to the one on one use of iPads.
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